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Sometimes all of us feel
like that girl in the rain
caught without her umbrella
unprotected from pain

Like the little guy crying
'cause his grandaddy died
yet the world keeps on going
you gotta keep going, don't hide

Stuck in the middle
when the world turns to grey
yet around you are the people
that keep living each day

You want to give up,
put please do not give in
'cause there's someone who needs you
to keep them from that sin

So when all the world crumbles
cracks they appear
remember, to lose you would kill me
and I don't need the tears.
©2005-2009 ~trixibella
:icontrixibella:

Author's Comments

This poem just sort of, came out, this evening. I started writing not expecting to get anywhere but it just poured out of me. I guess I started writing it as I, and most people, can relate to feeling like this at times - being ready to give up.

It is the first piece of poetry I have exhibited on devART. In fact, the first completed piece of poetry I have done in the past couple of years that I created of my own free will.

Please read & comment!

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:iconangry-wetback:
sweet :) when are you going to submit something new?

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I'm a Spatial Entrepreneur: I.E., I deal in the buying and selling of pieces of the heavens.
:icontrixibella:
ahh i haven't been on here in ages. i don't really write poetry so i doubt i'll ever be submitting anything writing-wise again... if i get around to it, i drew a couple of pictures the other day i might put up. who knowsss

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